Pls read this poem and tell me what you think ...?

1)Rusty glint, non existent kudos

Home to Giza, Mother of Axum!

How much longer shall this syndrome?

Whence our exit from this doom?

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2)Farms gone barren while children starve

Lily and hibiscus wither in mourning

Goodwill wanting- yet, dreams denied

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3)Mumbo-jumbo, the dwell in nonsense

Hearts so cruel as if possessed

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Pls read this poem and tell me what you think ...?
If you say so....
Reply:not a bad start -- you still have your day job don't you ??
Reply:I don't get it.
Reply:I like this poem. My interpretation of it.

From times past, great empires have risen and fail. All that was great and noble are crushed and all "good said" will be lost and forgotten.



famin and drought, starving children, brings people to want to do good, but with a starving belly, the good-will is like a flower wilting in the suns heat. It's still wanting, and many have been denied. With all confusion we act or pretend to be as if possessed trying to hold on to what you have. Chaos has always been mans plight
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